User blog comment:IAmEmilyTheCat/The Story Of Ralts (part 1)/@comment-31267872-20171216183659

Can you put it like I mentioned before? You don't have to do it, but it makes it so much easier to read.

Here, can I just put your story in the format that I'd like it? You obviously don't need to do it this way though, just a suggestion.

Ralts was a young Pokémon. Her mother was Gardevoir, father was Gallade, and brother was Kirlia. Ralts was young and silly. Her best friends were Riolu, Bagon, and Munchlax.

"Hey Ralts, does your mom have any food? I'm hungry!!!" Munchlax was a large-bellied Pokémon, with a blue back and a gut that was never full.

"I thought you just ate!" Riolu grumbled, the blue-black fighter annoyed at her fat friend.

"Calm down Riolu, Munchlax just wants a bite to eat." said the calm-as-ever Bagon, a nice, strong Pokémon.

"Or a couple of large bites!" Ralts joked. Mrs. Lucario, Mrs. Gardevoir, Mrs. Salamence, and Mrs. Snorlax were out for tea, so Mrr. Gallade was watching the four friends.

"Hey! It's not my fault you guys never have any food when I come over!" Munchlax cried.

"Hey, isn't the school dance tomorrow night?" Ralts asked.

"Didn't Tyrogue ask you out to the 'Pokémon Love' dance?" Riolu asked.

If you can write it like that, it's my suggestion that you write it like that. Good story, though!