User blog comment:Darren5996R/Lando's Strange Day/@comment-31636617-20170627023241

Let's revise this draft. It could get better if you re-write some sentence structures. OOH! You can also try elaborating by what you meant by "Lando was satisfied,..." and also, try making sentences longer. You need to publish this though, since   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah   blah blah blah blah, and Don't forget the copyright!