User blog comment:TheKnightOfIron/Chapter One: Mitis Town/@comment-32452525-20180217003533

Woah, dude, thats’s dark. I know this is a fan fiction, but saying they deserve it? That’s actually good for setting up a storyline, now that I think of it. Boy who, after saying something about his parents he didn’t mean, he goes on an epic journey to rescue them! And the story has to have a dog with a top hap in it. Yeah.